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Dear Dvid I know that you want to know about Chinese culture in the notice.I am glad to help you.I want to make you friend.I will teach you many Chinese cultures,because I live in China,China is my homeland.So I want to you can know about it better and love it very much. First,I will take you to go to some famous places,for example,The Great Wall,it was built in the Qing dynasty.It through long time.It is very long and beautiful.Secondly,I will teach you Chinese language or opera.That is very interesting.Lsat,I am going to take you to eat some food.You know that Chinese food is quite delicious.You can learn many Chinese cultures from food. I am very excited If I can help you.Looking forward your reply. Yours sincerely Li Hua