加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查。
Different people have different views about good teachers. I think a good teacher should have this two advantages.First,he is resposable. he is consentrate on his students. Not only is study,but aiso is health. Secondly,he can make friends with students. If students have sad things,he can chat with them.He also can play with them.As for playing ping-pong,go swimming,go shopping so on. Wy favorite teacher is English teacher.She is a woman.but she is like a child. She often play with us. We make her is our friend.When we are not happy ,we find her. Because she can play jokes for us.This make us become happy.