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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(82):我心目中的好老师

发布时间:2015-04-30 10:16浏览次数:576
要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Everyone must receive education from teachers at school or at university. Think about all the teachers who have taught you. Can you find which one is your favorite? And the reason? Are the teachers you liked best also the ones who were the most excellent teachers with good qualities? Before you read the following paragraphs, think about what qualities make a teacher extraordinary (优秀的).
Most people will say that the several important qualities of a teacher are that he should love his students, that he needs to have an expert knowledge of his subject, and that he should devote himself to his jobs whole – heartedly. All of these can be the good qualities of a teacher but not all.
As we all know, it is impossible for a teacher to love every one of his students that he teaches in his life. Teachers must try their best to make most of their students interested in the subject so that they are able to teach themselves in the future. This requires teachers to master many teaching skills, which include how to control a class and so on. Teachers have to spend much time and energy on their work. However, students also imitate many things of the teacher, so it is also important for teachers to be well – balanced people with interest outside their schoolwork – family, friends, hobbies etc.
 [写作内容]
1)概括短文的内容要点,该部分的字数大约30词左右;
2)就“我心目中的好老师”这个主题发表你的看法,至少包含以下的内容要点,该部分的字数大约120词左右;
a.你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质;
b.结合自己的经历,介绍你喜欢的一位老师。
[写作要求]
(1)你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容。
但不要抄袭阅读材料的句子。
(2)题目自定。
用户的作文(系统评分56.0分
评语:

正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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Different persons have different views about good teachers. I think a good teacher should have two advantages.First,he is responsible. He is fcous on his students. Not only is study,but also is healthy. Secondly,he can make friends with students. If students have sad things,he can chat with them.He can also play with them.As for playing ping-pong,go swimming,go shopping so on. My favorite teacher is English teacher.She is a woman.but she is like a child. She often plays with us. We are friends.When we are not happy,we find her. Because she can play her jokes for us.This makes us become happy.

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