正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Different persons have different views about good teachers. I think a good teacher should have two advantages.First,he is responsible. He is fcous on his students. Not only is study,but also is healthy. Secondly,he can make friends with students. If students have sad things,he can chat with them.He can also play with them.As for playing ping-pong,go swimming,go shopping so on. My favorite teacher is English teacher.She is a woman.but she is like a child. She often plays with us. We are friends.When we are not happy,we find her. Because she can play her jokes for us.This makes us become happy.