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I am a longly woman. I haven't many friends. I'd like hang out with some people, but I don't like judgment from people. First we were enjoy our happy time. We can shopping together, eating at a nice restaurant,go to the theater. Later they always ask me some private question that make me frezy out.I know this is not their fault, it's my problem. i cann't trust poeple. Have a friendship is difficulte for me. I think I need some training for how to get a friend.