文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
it is not wisdom that get a conclusion merely listening and seeing something .So we must make a judgment by deeply think,excusive error in our routine life.While some people make their choice too harry to avoid mistake.How can we make a correct opinion,i do not understand,what about you.Do you have some good idea
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