Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。
With the improvement of people's quality of life, more and more people now have a mobile phone, the phone not only brings convenience to our lives, so we get more friendship, gradually we become increasingly dependent on the phone, every day we take send a message with the phone, the Internet, play micro-letters, play games, but excessive use of mobile phones will cause a lot of problems. For example, at a birthday party, if everyone uses the phone will affect our friendship. If at home, you overuse smartphone and ignored communicate with their parents will cause family problem. If you use phone too much and neglect personal relationships will make you lose a lot of opportunity ,and you will become a loner, more and more lonely. The most important reason is the mobile phone will also affect your health, mobile phone radiation can lead to dementia, affects sleep. , Affecting work and depressed mood, interpersonal tensions. Mobile phones are now controlled us in life, down the road race, walk, eat, ride, lying in bed ...... all the time playing mobile phone, the phone itself radiation and receive calls in our colleagues will have a impact, all the time playing with the cell phone, this action is not only caused a lot of insecurity, but also for our own body has a serious injury. This will result in an increase in traffic accidents, spinal cord injury, the brain and the heart are also hurt, especially damage to the eyes is particularly serious. Therefore, to our families and friends, for our health, in order to better living and working, reduce the use of mobile phones is very urgent.
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