2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

With the social development,computer has become an impratial in our daily life.Now,everyone has a computer or electrited productor such as a telephone.So,how to deal with the way of using computer has become a life-long course that everyone has to take. Then,I will give some personnal opinions.Firstly,computer plays an important play in our working and instand of lobal. Secondly,computer helps us shorting the distancing between families and friends who living in the different country and which makes our life more convenient.We can tounch through internet frequently.Thirdly,computer makes our life more funny.We can get the news and popular songs which can make us more happy. In a word , computer has viours advances,but it also has the deadvantages.So,we should have the ability to judge what is right or wrong.