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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分63.0分
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句式多变,多多练习从句的使用;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇基础不错,同时请加强单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

In all ages,it is very common for people to judge a person by their appearance Yet it is unwise because people make great progress not by their appearance but by their own capability In ancient the emperors select high officers through four standards which one is handsome and highly esteemed By this we can see one's appearance is very important for one's future life Having a beautiful appearance facial features you may get more good opinion from other people which do a help to you in all times Nonetheless appearance doesn't depend on everything In history many unattractive people also made a great career such as tuxingsun in our fairy story panshangjiang in social society One's sucess may be connected with luck appearance power but mainly matter it is the ability So why we concorn our face We can make up for it by other ways for example konwledgement kindness politeness and so on Therefore the thing we have to learn is not how beatiful we look but how clever and pure we are Learn more ,you will be beautiful It'a a beauty from your heart

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