2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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Today.more and more people make decision by they first look.it is unwise make conclution before deeply think,becauese have many other fact you should to considered. Firstly,when you think your friends si beaudeful must clever but in max they perform badly.Scendly,our mother and father often critize our led our hate them,think of they are very selfish ,but we are never know they spend many sweat and care.they often go to bed latter fou consider of what our ea and do tomorow .Lastly,we look a film ofen stay afficial face ,but every film also have deepy meaning about sociaty or our life. So,in my opinions,we should think twice before make decision .It not only good for ourselves but also benifit to others,if you follow this method you can become more grateful and will be a available peple fou our contry.