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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。
The Great Wall,I think,is a marvelous place to be shown around to a foreign friend. Firstly,as we all know,the Great Wall is one of the sight of the world,which symbolizes the civilization and history of our country,it is honorable to me to show this remarkable and grand historic remains to foreigner.Besides,after you have walked a long distance,your mind will completely be relaxed and undoubtly it is of benefit to our health.furthermore,at the process of visiting,we will built up a harmonious relationship between us,and it is a indepentable chance to exchange our cultures and forming a new vision to the culture. I strongly hold that the Great Wall will contribute to a fantastic trip to the foreign friend.
