2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者在句法层面做的很棒；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累。

The Great Wall,I think,is a marvelous place to be shown around to a foreign friend. Firstly,as we all know the Great Wall is one of the sight of the world,which symbolizes the civilization and history of our country,it is honorable to me to show this remarkable and grand historic remains to foreigner.Besides,after you have walked a long distance,your mind will completely be relaxed and undoubtedly it is of benefit to our health.furthermore,at the process of visiting,we will built up a harmonious relationship between us,and it is a indispensable chance to exchange our cultures and forming a new vision to the culture. I strongly hold that the Great Wall will contribute to a fantastic trip to the foreign friend.