2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；复杂句的使用不是很丰富；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

With the development of economy and society ,it's well-known that it is neccessary for us to have a computer.because a computer is more involved in our life and work. Man have a special relationship with computers. We will express the relationship of computer and man. Fistly,on our daily life ,on one the hand we can go shopping on the internet and watch movies by a computer .on the other hand we can studay knowlege and pay more attention the whole world news. Secondly,on our worklife ,it is important for us to use computers to solve all kinds of problems.We need to accept information and communicate with workers and so on. Findly ,computer is like parterns and a tool.Man don't take away computers ,at some times,computer also need man to dispay it's value. Man product ,use,maintain and deplay on it . As far as i'm concerned ,computers are the friends of man .Computers need man and man also needs computers.