字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;文章层次较为清晰。
The Attitude to The Fustration From the picture we can see that a bottle lying on the ground with some spilled milk. Two men stand by the bottle and one of they say sadly:" It's all over!" , but the other says:" So lucky that there exist a few!" Whatever do the picture want to tell about? The purpose of the picture is telling us that when we get trouble in life, work or study, different people have different attitudes. The active attitude try to find the good side in difficulties, however, the people who keep the negative mind will always complain about the things they lost. In brief, attitude decide one's height. As far as I can see, we should follow the positive-mind people when we face trouble. Whatever the difficulty we have to face in life, we'd better choose a positive attitude. Only we are active can we make success.