如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
I am honor to tell you something about my hometown.I am come from a coastal town in China.My hometown is very beautiful and exsit many resorts,such as mountains ,seaside and so on.The reason why I instruct it as following. There are more and more tourists coming my hometown.Here,you can swim in the sea,play at the seaside,go fishing by boat.What is more,you also climb mountains.It not only see beautiful scenenery but also keep healthy. By and large,my hometown is a place where has many beautiful resorts,I hope you can come to visit it.It is absoluted worth visiting.