2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；全文结构较为严谨；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但高级词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视。

I am honored to tell you something about my hometown.I come from a coastal town in China.My hometown is very beautiful and exsit many resorts,such as mountains ,seaside and so on.The reason why I instruct it as following. There are more and more tourists visiting my hometown.Here,you can swim in the sea,play at the shore,go fishing by boat.What is more,you also climb mountains.It not only see beautiful scenenery but also keep healthy. By and large,my hometown is a place where has many beautiful resorts,I hope you can come to visit it.It is worth visiting absolutely.