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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71633
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰。

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I am honored to tell you something about my hometown.I come from a coastal town in China.My hometown is very beautiful and exists many resorts,such as mountains,seaside and so on.The reason why I introduce it as following. There are more and more tourists visiting my hometown.Here,you can swim in the sea,play at the beach,go fishing by boat.What is more,you also climb mountains. By and large,my hometown is a place where has many beautiful resorts,I hope you can come to visit it.It is worth visiting absolutely.

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