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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
nowadays，there is a hot debate on whether people, including students should be careful with their money in their daily life since they try their best to save money.some people think it is not good to do so because this might not make people be smart consumers，but in my view，there are more advantages than disadvantages。so i think it being careful with money in daily life is a good thing。 firstly，as we all know，being careful with money in daily life is a good virtue that people can always benifit from it，and whenever people are in trouble especially economical trouble ，a good habit of being careful with money in daily life will help people go through this difficult period or any other difficult financial situation in their life. secondly，people can make good use of money in daily life and learn how to manage money。 in a word，if we could form this habit，being careful with money in daily life，our life will become better and better，what is more，it teach people to make best use of their money。
