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4. 突然，一只巨大的蚂蚁向她飞快跑去，她很害怕，大声呼救但没人回答。最后她醒过来，原来只是一个梦。
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Hi Martin, Last week I read two articles from the book “Alice in Wonderland” in the English class and they are quite interesting. Yesterday night, I saw Alice standing beside my bed. She invited me to Wonderland. When we got to Wonderland, flowers sang and danced like people. They smiled and said hello to her. Monkeys, goldfish and camels flew around like birds in the sky. I tried my best to fly but still failed. Suddenly, a big ant ran quickly to me. I felt very afraid. I shouted for help but nobody replied. In the end I woke up and found it was just a dream. Isn’t that interesting? All the best Mary
