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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13043
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

When we speak of communication,we all feel that is essential for people to strongthen their relationship and eliminate the gap between them.I think the essence of the comunication is about how often we talk,and if it is a meaningful talk,maybe we haven't already contact with our families and friends for a long time due to sort of trival things,occasionlly we just send a simple messenge and say hello to them,but forget to inquire carefully if they get along well with everything.we have a short conversation and then we go deep inside our minds.people tend to be self-conscious and ignore the surroundings and the big advantages of the commincation.Firstly,it can ease our mind and enjoy the comincation with the familiar even the stranger,during the process,we help each other and maybe resolve some difficulties for each other,the warmful comfort words and the patience we showed become the cure for those sorrowful spirits.Secondly,during the process of the comunication,we can have a more perspective cognitive to ourselves,we can learn some shining points and overcome shortcomings. Finally,we can make more friends and broden the fields of society,which is very beneficial for our developing.

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