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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33570
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Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

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the advantages of being careful with money in our daily life Nowadays,some people think it's not good for people,including students to be careful with money in daily life.Because this may not make people be smart consumers.But as far as I am concerned,the advantages of being careful with money outweigh the disvantages. At first,being careful with money is a good habit for people.This good habit will help people go through the difficult timewhen they are in difficult financial situation or economic crisis someday in their daily life.People also think whether it worth before they buy something especially for students .Because students' finance must depend their parents .It's helpful for them not to wast money. The second,in fact,being careful with money means that you're learning how to manage your money,how to plan your life.It's a good,efficient way to realize your dream that manage to manage money.Many people especially make some financial management majors or banks guide them with finances.But they have forgotten that being careful with money is the simple way to manage money.The key to this way is simple by practicing.It can teach people how to makebest of their money. Of course,there are disadvantages fir being careful with money.It can affect people's shopping enthusiasm and circulation of commodities.But in short, the advantages of being careful with money outweigh the disadvantages.

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