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The most interesting place Along with the development of society,many foreign friends visit our country.From the part that supposes I have a foreign friend were going to visit my hometown,I will take him/she visit a very interesting place.Now I will share with you about the reason why I doing so. First off all,I will take him/she visit Beijing.As all known Beijing is our capital,it is a county'ssymbol of China,it have a long history and culture.On the one hand, the Great Wall is the Ming dynasty's represent,the Forbidden City is the Qing dynasty's symbol,all of them are wonderful,beautiful and special.One the other hand,Beijing is one of the economic city in China,which has a developed economic made it became a modern city,and assembled many excellent talent.That is a very attractive place. In my opinion,it is a worth to visit place, and I like it very.And take your foreign friends to visit Beijing are very make sense too.