小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a friend named Konan. He was a famous detective.He was a High school student several months ago. But since he was attacked by a man who was with a criminal group in which all the members wore black, his body have changed into a primary school student. Fortunately, his high-school-student brain have been kept. so he is a primary-school-student detective now. He is good at almost every sport. And he is handsome, smart and charming even though he is just a seven-year-old boy. I will always love him and support him with his career of combating crime.