拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章衔接手法恰当;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足。
The most interesting place Along with the development of society,many foreign friends visit our country.From the part that supposes I have a foreign friend were going to visit my hometown,I will take him/she visit a very interesting place.Now I will share with you about the reason why I doing so. First off all,I will take him/she visit Beijing.As all known Beijing is our capital,it is a county's symbol of China,it has a long history and culture.On the one hand, the Great Wall is the Ming dynasty's represent,the Forbidden City is the Qing dynasty's symbol,all of them are wonderful,beautiful and special.On the other hand,Beijing is that the one of economic centers in China,which had a developed economy and its became a modern city,and assembled many excellent talent.That is a very attractive place. In my opinion,it is a place worth visiting, and I like it very.And if you take your foreign friends to visit that Beijing is a make sense too.