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My Favorite sport Playing football is my best holly. I loved playing football by chance;I picked up a football when I went home, and then I playing football with my friends together, I loved football from that moment. I often pactice football and match with my classmates. Beckham is my best favorite football star; My best dream is that I can become a professional football player.