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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36978
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分56.0分
评语:

正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。

用户练习作文:

We all know that English is very useful. Many people in the world speak English. So more and more people in China study it. How to study English well? I think we must have a good way to study English. If you want to learn English well, listening, speaking, reading and writing are important. You should listen to tapes every day. You should often speak English with your teachers and friends. You should read English every morning. And, you had better keep a diary every day. In this way, you can study English well.

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