行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;若增加一些长难句的使用,文章会更好;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
English is important for us.We can find it anywhere.Therefore,if I were an English composition,I will do three things to let student learning english thought hobbby. Firstly,I will use the poem and song because students always love music.Thus,it can attract them to learn. Seconly,I thing is can hold the English speaking day.On one hand,it can let student in english sitution.On the other hand,it can encourge them to speak english. Finally,I thing we should build up a reading club.Which can help students to have reading fun.