单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
The Old Cat An old woman had a cat. The cat was very old; she could not run quickly, and she could not bite, because she was so old. One day the old cat saw a mouse; she jumped and caught the mouse. But she could not bite it; so the mouse got out of her mouth and ran away, because the cat could not bite it. Now,I reading a short article English,about a old cat.I don't like it.But last it said for it's master,it still want to work for her,but it old.Remember it was young always work for her,please.It's moved me.