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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36939
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分51.0分
评语:

希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Then the old woman became very angry because the cat had not killed the mouse. She began to hit the cat. The cat said, "Do not hit your old servant. I have worked for you for many years, and I would work for you still, but I am too old. Do not be unkind to the old, but remember what good work the old did when they were young." Now,I reading a short article English,about a old cat.I don't like it.But last it said for it's master,it still want to work for her,but it old.Please remember it was young always work for her.It's moved me.

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