希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Then the old woman became very angry because the cat had not killed the mouse. She began to hit the cat. The cat said, "Do not hit your old servant. I have worked for you for many years, and I would work for you still, but I am too old. Do not be unkind to the old, but remember what good work the old did when they were young." Now,I reading a short article English,about an old cat.I don't like it.But last,it said for it's master,it still care for work for her,but it old.Please remember it was young always work for her.It's moved me.