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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2262
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays Internet has become extremely popular with us which cause a hot discus about whether it is useful to us.In this essay I will explain it. Of course,some think that Internet is of great help to us including the increasing rate of study and working.In this way,the complexing job can be done by us easily with the help of the Internet.And we can acquire the first information in time to take the quick action to deal with problems.What's more,Internet is a convenient tool to make new friends.However,every coin has two sides,others think that Internet makes youth addicted to it so their study is badly influenced.Even worse,Internet may consume most of valuable time and at the same time there are many cheating activities on the Internet. In my opinion,Internet is a double-edged sword,only we use properly can it have a good influence on us.

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