小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Today,I know some about study English way.English is very useful,and I have to learn English.I have to keep a diary,English diary. Now,I reading a short article English,about an old cat.I don't like it.But last,it said for it's master,it still works for her,but it old.Please remember,when it was young always work for her.It's moved me.