小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Today,I know some about study English way.English is very useful,and I have to learn English.I have to keep a diary,English diary. Now,I reading a short article English,about an old cat.I don't like it.But last,it said for it's master,it still works for her,but it old.Please remember,when it was young always work for her.It's word moved me.