高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

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i think you must have curious about chinese festival Mid-Autumn .mid-autumn is a traditional festival of china which has a long history.in chinese,the moon in mid-autumn always mean with familys together,it's why people enjoy the day always with their family.on the day,people'll have dinner with their family.they also will eat mooncakes while they enjoying the moon light. who don't like with family?that is why chinese peaple love mid-autumn.i hope you'll like mid-autumn too. your's li hua