2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中高级词汇使用较丰富，但是拼写错误比较多。

Nowadays,with the development of science and technology,the usage of internet is becoming more and more popular among teens and adults.people who are in favor of the internet chaim that it has a lot of advantages.Firstly,they can learn something any time and any where on the internet.secondly,they have more efficent by using the internet. However,some people think that it bring into some problems.In the first place,teens are easily addicated in it.In another place,it costs considerable time ,money,energy,especially for those with poor self-control and make teens have a low grades. As far as i am concerned,the development of internet will bring into more benefits than wastage.On the on hand,the internet can enhance the connection between people and people.On the other hand,it makes our life become more conveniently and efficiently.I believed that people will acknowledge the benefit of internet in the furture.