2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文中词汇表达用的较灵活，同时能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

Nowadays,with the development of science and technology,the usage of internet is becoming more and more popular among teens and adults.People who are in favor of the internet claim that it has a lot of advantages.Firstly,they can learn something anytime and anywhere on the internet.secondly,they have more efficient by using the internet. However,some people think that it brings into some problems.In the first place,teens are easily addicted in it.In another place,it costs considerable time,money,energy,especially for those with poor self-control and make teens have a low grades. As far as i am concerned,the development of internet will bring into more benefits than wastage.On the on hand,the internet can enhance the connection between people and people.On the other hand,it makes our life become more conveniently and efficiently.I believed that people will acknowledge the benefit of internet in the furture.