- 分享到:
采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩。
In my mind, I think the most interesting city in China is Guangzhou which is my second hometown. Guangzhou is a city where includes history and fashion. It has two thousand years history and here is the origin of the south of China. The museums will broaden our horizon and improve our knowledge. Though Guangzhou is a historical city, it is also a modern city, too. Guangzhou Tower is the tallest tower in the south of China; There are many business streets in Guangzhou and the Shangxiajiu Business street is the most famous one. Many international brands have estabished their films in Guangzhou which makes here full of modern. That's why I will take my foreign friend to visit Guangzhou.
