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采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积。
In my mind, I think the most interesting city in China is Guangzhou which is my second hometown. Guangzhou is a city that includes history and fashion. Here is the origin of the south of China and it has two thousand years history. The museums will broaden our horizons and improve our knowledge. Though Guangzhou is a historical city, it is also a modern city, too. Guangzhou Tower is the tallest tower in the south of China; There are many commercial streets in Guangzhou and the Shangxiajiu Commercial street is the most famous one. Many international brands have estabished their films in Guangzhou which makes here modern than before. That's why I will take my foreign friend to visit Guangzhou.
