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题目要求：
Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following three:
1. All costs are paid by the government.
2. All costs are paid by the student.
3. All costs are paid by the student using loans from the government that must be repaid after graduation. Discuss the benefits of each option. Which is the best one?
题目讲解：
语料库：
1. the higher education = college education 高等教育
2. the students’ loans = educational loans 学生贷款
3. work one’s way through college 半工半读
4. apply for the scholarship 申请奖学金
5. potential risk of refusing to repaying the loans 拒绝还款的风险
6. impose much pressure upon a nation economically 增加了政府的经济压力
7. come from the remote rural areas
8. subsidize = sponsor = finance 资助
9. economic support 经济支持
10. finish college education 完成高等教育
11. resolve more pressing social issues 解决更加紧迫的民生问题
12. stimulate one’s study motivation under the pressure of …… 在压力下激发学习动力
13. cherish the learning opportunities 珍惜学习的机会
14. face the risk of dropping out of school 面对辍学的风险
15. embark on part-timers 做兼职工作
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇基本功不错，高级词汇表达灵活熟练；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句。
With the increasingly vehement competition in modern society and the more crucial role which education can play in assisting the young to succeed and to make a difference,more and more people pay more attention to the importance of higher education.Then,as a significant section in social train,higher education certainly will cost immense resource,such as architecture,staffs,relevant industry and noticeable financial supports,which elicits this question who should pay the price,i.e.offer the fiscal funds to all costs.Among so many debates,three main ways stand out but they all have their rationales and shortcomings. Firstly,some experts think that all cost should be paid by the government because the youngsters will become essential members after finishing higher education,thus making them competent for social progress and qualified for devotion to this citizenry.Indeed,graduates and post-graduates possessing helpful knowledge,including technology,natural science,social science and practical skills,etc.,will dedicate themselves into fulfilling their destiny,which is making our civilization more resplendent.However,as can be seen in many developed countries,what the government and its fiscal ministry have spent on higher education cannot gain the desirable consequence.For example,myriad undergraduates whose majors are not what they will do in the future cannot make the expectation of officials real.And the funds could be a very burdensome and stringent chain for government in democratic countries where the terms about financial expenditure must be strictly tested and inspected by the parliament. Secondly,many people,especially some economists,hold the point that all expenses should be paid by students themselves.Obviously,this idea could be cruel even in developed countries.Because the social framework in modern society is so complex that it is impossible to guarantee the fact that everyone can enjoy this opportunity to accept higher education.Furthermore,if all costs would be paid by students,the schools were to try their best to heighten the tuition fee.However,students must pay some parts of the expenses,thus coercing them to cherish the chance and making efforts in learning useful skills. Thirdly,some pragmatists say that all costs are to be paid by the student using loans from the government that must be repaid after graduation.Actually,this mean is the popular policy for adolescents who will get enrolled in university and college.By this way,students living in impoverished backgrounds and thus having no possibility to be maticulated if without the sponsorship of governmental institution,can attain the precious channel to alter their fate and their family's status.But,it is also apparent and eye-catching that some students cannot get the satifactory employment which can offer plenty of currency to repay the cost after graduation,so that there are enormous fiscal blackholes in the chains of financial system and cracks in social credit system. In conclusion,three ways all have their advantages and disadvantages.In my view,I think that the third method,i.e.loans which must be paid after graduation,could be the most efficient way,whose shortcomings are the smallest and can warrant the best output.
