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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。
Electronic Communication of the Impact to People As we all known, along with the development of science and technology,electronic communication also more popular.From the part,we known that people more and more like communication with others in Internet.Now I will share with you about the reason why I thinking so. First of all,some people think that the development of science and technology advanced the pace of life,people's lives had to accelerated.What's more,the virtual lives could made people more arbitraty,they aren't looks others facial expressions.Hence,people are prefer to live a real lives than to a virtual lives.On the other hand, many words are hard to say,but the Internet is a good carrier,many words are easy to say,people are no longer shy. As far as I was concerned,I believed that electronic communication will decreased our time get along with others.So we should increased time with our family and friends rather than electronic communication in virtual world.
