Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
Electronic Communication of the Impact to People As we all know, along with the development of science and technology,electronic communication also more popular.From the part,we known that people more and more like communication with others in Internet.Now I will share with you about the reason why I thinking so. First of all,some people think that the development of science and technology advanced the pace of life,people's lives had to accelerate.What's more,the virtual lives could made people more arbitraty,they are no longer need to look others facial expressions.Hence,people are prefer to real lives than to virtual lives.On the other hand, many words are hard to say when face to face,but the Internet is a good carrier,many words are easy to say.Also people are no longer shy. As far as I was concerned,I believed that electronic communication will be decreased our time got along with others.So we should be increased time with our family and friends rather than electronic communication in virtual world.