希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;文中从句过少;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
I'm very glad you could come, Mr. Liu. Will you take a seat at the head of the table? It's an informal dinner, please don't stand on ceremony. Today is Sunday.Sunday always have a piano class ago.But today isn't have it.Because,don't more than date,I'm going to test.It's very important.So,I earnestly go over the lessons. Writing the diary,I'm meeting many I can't spell word.It's "always","piano","important", "lesson",and I don't know "earnestly","review","go over".I have to hard study English.