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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:37013
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分38.5分
评语:

词汇表达较灵活准确,高级词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;简单句有点多,从句数量使用不足;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。

用户练习作文:

I'm very glad you could come, Mr. Liu. Will you take a seat at the head of the table? It's an informal dinner, please don't stand on ceremony... Mr. Liu, would you like to have some chicken? today is Sunday.Sunday I'm always have a piano class ago.But today don't have it.Because don't more than day,I'm going to test.It's very important.So,I'm earnestly go over the lessons. Writing the diary,I'm meeting many I can't spll word.It'sthese:always,piano,important, lesson,and I don't know earnestly,review,go over.I have to hard study English.

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