小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a friend,Joy,who is my best friend. He is eight years old.He has a golden hair and blue eyes so he is very handsome. We have a lot of same hobbies,such as basketball, computer,reading and so on. I like him very much and i hope that we will be good friend forever.