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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36933
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分42.5分
评语:

正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

用户练习作文:

I'm very glad you could come, Mr. Liu. Will you take a seat at the head of the table? It's an informal dinner, please don't stand on ceremony. Today is Sunday.On Sunday,I always have a piano class.But today I don't have it.Not many days.I'm going to test.It's very important.So,I earnestly go over the lessons. Writing the diary,I'm meeting many I can't spell words.It's "always","piano","important","lesson".And I don't know "earnestly","review","go over".I have to hard study English.

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