若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
I'm very glad you could come, Mr. Liu. Will you take a seat at the head of the table? It's an informal dinner, please don't stand on ceremony. Today is Sunday.On Sunday,I always have a piano class.But today I don't have it,Because I don't have many days,and I'm going to test.It's very important.So,I must earnestly go over the lessons. Today writing the diary,I'm meeting many I can't spell words.And I don't know "earnestly","review","go over","always","piano","important","lesson".I have to hard study English.