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2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:50浏览次数:11746
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题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

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Private Car Owners Should be taxed for Pollution Recently, pullution tax has become a heated topic among public.Some person believed that it can be benefit for the environment, while others argue that it is unnecessary and useless. Personally speaking, every coin has two sides, and I intend to show the benefit of pullution tax counter balance its disadvantages. Firstly, private cars should take the marvelous responsibility for air pollution. As we all know, with the development of economy and the improvement of people's life, almost everyone has their own car, then led to the condition that the polluted gas release to the air. Taking pollution tax can reduce their eager to buy car, which is good for our environment. Secondly, pollution tax can provide a money source for our country to solve the serious environmental problem. Our government can use that money to establish air clean system and improve the environmental equipment, which can have a great influence on the situation Finally, people should pay for what they had done. Pollution tax is a dispensable part for us to improve the condition.

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