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Private Car Owners Should be taxed for Pollution Recently, pullution tax has become a heated topic among public.Some person believed that it can be benefit for the environment, while others argue that it is unnecessary and useless. Personally speaking, every coin has two sides, and I intend to show the benefit of pullution tax counter balance its disadvantages. Firstly, private cars should take the marvelous responsibility for air pollution. As we all know, with the development of economy and the improvement of people's life, almost everyone has their own car, then led to the condition that the polluted gas release to the air. Taking pollution tax can reduce their eager to buy car, which is good for our environment. Secondly, pollution tax can provide a money source for our country to solve the serious environmental problem. Our government can use that money to establish air clean system and improve the environmental equipment, which can have a great influence on the situation Finally, people should pay for what they had done. Pollution tax is a dispensable part for us to improve the condition.
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