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With the increasingly rapid develpoment of unbanization and alongside the inevitable alteration of quotidian lifestyle,residents living in developed countries and underdeveloped states which are experiencing industrilization,tend to live individually or in small family units.As a result of this eye-catching phenomenon,numerous experts and academicians,especially sociologists and economists,are delving into its cause and latent effects on society.Personally thinking,this condition has its root in economic modernization and cutural vicissitudes,so were its effects. As for its reasons,it is clear that the change of family structure cannot be activated by only one or two catalysts.But there is still the most influential factor which tears apart the traditional framework of residental style.Among those factors,the economic compulsion is obviously the most significant.Because market economy makes the whole coutry or state a holistic system,where all industrial elements,including land,labor,currency,and natural resources,etc.,have to be commercialised and thus can move freely.Moreover,the workforce,such as strong men who want to sell their strength,those adolescents who intent to purchase promising careers in exotic world,someone who possesses technological skiils and artistic talent,and so on,all make their mind to leave for other place where they can get higher salary and fulfill their ambition.Therefore,the family composed of several nuclear families in the past has to been divided into some distant relatives. However,just because they,with emulous decision,want to earn money cannot completely interpret the complex process of the caprice which sabotages the thousand-year tradition.Furthermore,the cultural change is also the fundamental factor.Clearly,it is the psychological ideology and the reluctance to accept ancient tradition that give people the eventual catalyst and momentum to leave from those big families.Especially,people no longer hold this idea that the bondage between parents and children is essential for kids who need to express their respect and concern. Similarly,the effects are also complicated and diverse.Firstly,the division of stationary family liberates countless workers and technicians,thus making the economy more bouncing and flexible.Secondly,the movement of numerous population propels the establishment and improvement of many cities,including "super ring of cities" and middle cities and small towns.However,this surprising revolution not only has striking influence on society and economy,but also has transparent effect on filial relationships.Because family's role has been diversified,which means traditional responsibility cannot been finished utterly,the senior layer and the children could be missed by their familes. In conclusion,on basis of above rationales,the process is unavoidable and its reason involves many aspects of social vicissitudes.And its effect has pros and cons.So the government and those experts should take action or erect policies to make this situation develop towards the beneficial condition and circumvent its shortcomings.
