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I think you must be curious about Mid-Autumn Day.Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival of China which has long history.Mid-Autumn Day is means with family,so people always enjoying the day with their familys.On Mid-Autumn Day people will come to their homeland to have dinner with their familys even though they were very busy and very far from their homeland.And if the night is moonlight,people will eat mooncake with their familys while they enjoying the moonlight.Every chinese love Mid-Autumn Day,I hope you will like the day too. yours,Li Hua.