2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

With the boom of techonology,computers are playing the striking role in the life of human being.There is no doubt that the use of computers makes works more efficient and realse people from innumerable trial assignments,particularly in the aspect of accumulating some complicated datas.What's more,computers extend the scale of communications.You can acquire more and more information by computers in the short time. But the computer is a double facets sword.On the one hand,it makes our life more convenient;on the other hand,the extensive use of computers will cause some severe problems.In terms of children,if they stare at the screen of computers,it will deteriate their eyesight and is harm to their spine.In addition,some persons frequently use computers to write somethings,so that when they want to write somethings in their hands,they forget how to write these. Computers are just tools to help people's life more better,but we can not be controled by them.