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字数：300 满分：100分
文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；作者高级词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
It is a truth universally acknowledged that the money students in possession of always come from their parents.More and more，what students should learn in college is not only knowledge but also be a sane consumer.So，as far as I‘m concerned，students should save money and learn to be a sane consumer. A recent investigation indicated that most college students overspend their living expenses.Take myself for instance，I spent my most money on travelling，shopping in the first year in college.Finally，slight was the thing I bought，I found most of them are not useful.It dawns on me that because of my feeble conservation awareness，I wasted too much money and too many resources.On the contrary，if I learn to be a rational consumer，I will save money and pave my way for the future development.But how can we be a rational consumer？In my opinion,we should set up a consumption plan and track our spending detailedly.Keeping expenditures within the limits of income is what we should do.If possible,we can set aside a fiddling sum of money from living expenses in every month,year after year，we will establish a small coffer for ourselves. All in all，if we learn to be save money and be a rational consumer in college ，we will learn more .
